As a former McKinsey resume screener, I’ve read a lot of consulting cover letters for consulting roles of all types.
Most applicants severely under-estimate the importance of the cover letter and end up paying more attention to the consulting resume/CV than they do the cover letter. I would argue the effort allocation should be reversed — much more time put into the cover letter than the resume or CV.
Here’s why.
Without a good cover letter it is 1) hard to stand out, and 2) easy to get overlooked by accident.
When someone like me screens cover letters and resumes, we usually do so in batches — dozens if not hundreds of applicants at the same time. When I was on the McKinsey Stanford recruiting team, I had to go through a stack of 400 resumes and consulting cover letters in a few hours.
Keep in mind these were 400 applicants ALL of whom were in the process of graduating from Stanford. So the applicant pool was already pretty strong.
From an resume screener’s point of view, reviewing that many cover letters is a very painful experience. All the cover letters look and sound the same.
It is VERY obvious that most of them are mail merge letters that look like this:
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Dear Sir/Madam:
I am writing to apply for the with .
My background as a XYZ Position, I feel I would be a good fit for the position.
Blah, blah, blah… BORING.
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The reason boring is a problem is because it shows the reader that YOU DO NOT CARE about this role. It doesn’t show that you’ve done any homework about this company or role.
In other words, from an interest standpoint you have not distinguished yourself in the slightest.
This is both a problem and an opportunity. No matter how qualified you may or may not be (which is too late to change at this point), you CAN control how much interest you show to the resume / cover letter reader.
In addition, a good cover letter should pinpoint the SPECIFIC items on the resume or CV that DIRECTLY RELATES to what the employer is looking for in that role.
As a resume screener, I did not READ every resume submitted. I SCAN them looking for recognizable keywords. These keywords are basically brand names (universities and employers), Test Scores, GPAs.
The problem for you is that when a resume screener (note: I didn’t say resume “reader”) scans your resume he/she is prone to overlooking things you might want to emphasize. This is especially the case if what you have done is impressive, but not encapsulated in a brand name that is easily recognizable.
For example, lets say you started a company and sold it for $50 million… BUT your company’s name is not well known. If you simply put that on a resume, there’s a reasonable chance this accomplishment will be overlooked in a quick resume scan. BUT, if you EXPLAIN your accomplishment in a cover letter, it definitely will not.
When I screened applicants, even those just applying for a McKinsey internship, I ALWAYS read the first few paragraphs of EVERY cover letter. I usually did not read the whole cover letter, unless I read something intriguing in the first few paragraphs.
If the cover letter was mediocre, I would typically just scan the resume really quickly just to confirm my inclination to put the application in the reject pile.
If the cover letter was either impressive or interesting, I would definitely read the entire cover letter and read the entire resume very carefully.
In other words, the cover letter is the FIRST thing the employer sees and determines whether or not they will bother to learn more about you.
So what’s the big lesson here?
The perfect cover letter for a consulting job (or any job for that matter) is NOT A FORM LETTER!
Trust me on this one.
Every cover letter for each firm should be unique and different than the letters you write to other firms.
I’ve read thousands of cover letters in my career. It is torture to read them.
You must stand out.
There are a few things you can do to stand out, listed in no particular order:
1) Get your brand names into the first sentence or paragraph (You know… Harvard, your Olympic Medals, etc…:)
2) Show you did your homework about the firm (very important). Why do you want to work for that particular firm? What’s your unique reason? How sure are you of your preferences? Why?
3) Talk to people at the firm (google: informational interviews) to see what the firm is about. Do your homework. Then in the cover letter, name names… mention the names of people in the firm you’ve spoken to, what they said about the firm, and why what they said got you interested in the firm.
4) Explain why you’d bit a good fit for the firm. It’s not good enough to be qualified. There are lots of qualified people out there. Consulting firms and employers in general like to hire people who are both qualified and motivated by legitimate and sincere reasons.
A good phrase to use in your cover letter is something like this.
“Unlike other candidates you’re seeing that probably have XYZ trait, I have ABC trait because of my experience at XYZ company.”
Example:
Unlike other candidates you’re seeing who probably seem enthusiastic about consulting, I am certain of my interest in consulting because of my recent internship at ABC consulting firm.
The purpose of this kind of language is to make it EASY for the resume screener to figure out HOW YOU ARE DIFFERENT than the other applicants.
Don’t assume the person will figure it out by reading your resume. POINT OUT the difference and make it EASY for the person to tell.
This is especially true if you come from a non-traditional or non-business background. If going to consulting would be a big career shift for you, you’d better do a darn good job explaining why the shift makes sense.
Otherwise the assumption is a little bit, “he/she’s applying just for the heck of it.” And if your background is amazing, it’s possible you’ll get an interview with a lousy cover letter.
Personally, I had networked like crazy to meet people in consulting before I ever applied for real. I knew them. They knew me. I knew I wanted to do consulting… and I think it came across.
My resume wasn’t amazing. It was a B+.
Every cover letter I wrote was different from the other ones I wrote. I regularly quoted memorable things from specific people I spoke to from those firms and explained why I was impressed by them.
Even to this day, I still remember what impressed me about certain people at each firm… and what I thought it showed about the firm.
In short, I most definitely had my reasons for why I was applying and I was very deliberate in sharing those reasons. And, most importantly, my cover letters didn’t look like any of the other ones.
After consulting, for every job I got after consulting, I probably averaged applying to only two or three companies for each job offer I received. I was very selective in who I wanted to work for. I did my homework. I explained my reasons in a good cover letter and more often than not got a meeting with the CEO.
Is this a lot of work?
YES!
Do most people take this much effort?
Heck no!
Why does it work?
Precisely because most people aren’t willing to do the extra work to stand out.
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Hey,
Great help!! I was about to submit an application for a consulting firm that I would love to join and your text make me think and review my cover letter.
Thanksss
Maria
Great advise! I’m in the process of trying to make a return to consulting and feel that the cover letter can be used as an asset (like you’ve described above), or can hurt you if its a generic form letter. This will definately make me rethink this part of the application!
great advice on reversing the weightage that a candidate gives to cv and that to a cover note.
Very nice ! Thanks a lot !!!
It is very nice and very helpful since I am teaching (for free) soft skills including Presentaion Skills, Communication Skills, Body Language, Professional C.V. writing, and Interview Skills. I am Profesor in Geology, but I do like these soft skills and I certainly beleive they are more important for every graduate student. I really like and appreciate these informative materials.
Really these are nice hints about the cover letter, Let me to thank you very so much
This was very helpful. My resume was so-so, and my improved cover letter definitely landed me my interviews.
Very helpful advice. I’m in the process of writing my cover letters and found the 4 items listed in the author’s post very helpful.
Thanks for posting this. In the past I’ve put forth a lot of effort in my cover letters, however, I was wondering if you could comment on the importance of length vs content. For many firms, I’ve had quotable things from many of their representatives, and their are many things about their firms that I could write about that attract me. In the past, I’ve had 5 paragraphs – an opener with the basics+ someone I’ve talked to and what they said, 2 paragraphs detailing an experience and how that relates to what they’re looking for, 1 paragraph with three things about the firm I like, and then a sign off. Typically, I have to shrink the font to 11 to fit it on the page, but I’m worried that this is looked down upon/people won’t read something that long.
Is it better to keep it shorter and risk that they think it’s a form letter? Is the paragraph on why that particular firm too much, or is that a good thing? What do you suggest in general on balancing length and content?
Ben,
The “secret” is to make your cover letter unique, highly differentiated, and interesting. Length is secondary.
It is also VERY important to be concise. Do not use two words, when one will do. There’s no need to tell your life story, just focus on that which sets you apart.
However, I have seen hundreds of long and UNdifferentiate cover letters. This is the worst of all worlds.
-Victor
Victor,
How ‘unique’ is your cover letter allowed to be? I was also wondering how best to introduce the brands I have worked for in the first few sentences. Is it worth mentioning my high school job at McDonalds or is it best to leave that out? I was also wondering whether it’s vital to have a business background?
-Anna
There should be a nobler cause why do you want do consulting. There should be a bigger picture which needs to be mentioned in your cover letter. “I knew I want to do consulting”……….the reason should be mentioned. Mere form letter just wont do !
Thank you Victor for the tips. They would of surely help to me since I am intending to apply to some companies now.
Hi! This resource was very helpful and enlightening….BTW, is it possible for you to provide for a sample cover letter for say, BAIN??
I shall be extremely grateful to you!!
Regards
Divya
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Thanks for your great post. I feel like you just opened my eyes on how to actually write a good CV. Definitely something to keep in mind that we all should do our researches and homework on why we want to work at the specific firms that we are applying for.
Thanks for the great post and I will look forward to other great eye-opening posts!
Thank you for the amazing advice. I was actually thinking to start applying for consulting firms. However, I find my self midst of disqualifications. I got my degree from UW-Platteville in BSME and I didn’t even know of existence of consulting firms till few weeks ago after many failed attempts to find a job in my own field of study. Many job offers I got were in small manufacturing facilites and mostly hands on/get dirty type of jobs. When I learned about consulting firms where I can start work with the management, deal with international affairs, plus extensive international travel seemed like what I wanted all along. However, looking through many top consulting firm sites, they mainly hire honored Ivy League students with outstanding resumes. Even though I have highly developed analytical skills, as well as high passion in rapid growing global trade and economy, I found my self well under their cut off line. Should I even bother to apply for these companies?
Don’t bother.@kim:
@kim: I would say you dont know until you try! Find a company that is suitable with your background and go for it. After all if you shoot for the moon you mite end up among the stars. good luck
sir, i like your unique approach of making cover letter. sir i am in 3rd year of engineering and i tried my best to get even unpaid internships in mc kinsey and other prestigious company but i dint succed. sir please if you could reply suggest me what should i do in my summer which would be fruitful to me to get in any of the prestigious and world’s best consultancy.!!
Well , I really enjoyed reading your thoughts , but I think you should use figures from the site.
There are always a lot of information.
Froogle
Victor, I have read many book on “how to write cover letter,” but none touch on these important points like you do. Thank you so much for all of your generous help and advice.